Tuesday, July 5, 2011

A relation not to be forgotten!!!

From a real story of my life!!

One day I observed that there is a new living thing in my house. She was fast, proactive, and quick. She had the ability to plan for her actions and was able to respond to crisis. To make it simpler let's me give her the name "F2" (Fast and Furious). I was happy to see her responses and her ability to deal with situations. But, my mother was not so keen to stay with her. She constantly used to push me to send her out of our house. Anything prepared in house and F2 was always eager to review it and judge it. F2 was adamant and even after lot of efforts my mother was never able to stop her. As it is always difficult to hide beautiful things, many males around my house started following her and teasing her. Looking at the desperation in boys activities, we were scared that she might be in trouble sooner or later; it will be good if she can go back to her family.

One fine day (was not fine, when it ended) (6th July, 11), my mother was able to catch hold of her and asked me to send her out of our house. With utter disappointment, I went outside the house carrying her in my hands. She was scared with full of sweat, her beautiful body was warm (may be feverish) with fear of losing the house. Just when I came out, an evil saw her, he was constantly eyeing her. I tried to hide F2, I ran from there so that we can escape. Finding a lonely place with little confidence that no one is around and also with sadness of losing her, I paused. She instantly looked at me, with deeply involved in each other with eye contact, we said Good Bye to each other. I sat down and released her. But as I released her, I saw the evil, he came from behind the trees, there was a sign of ruthless laugh in his eyes, and I immediately challenged him and threw some stones on him. But he was extremely focused on his target; he took a small fly and captured F2 in his mouth. She shouted loud, she looked at me with the sadness and with last few words of "Do miss me"! He flew away, taking her along and her last words kept hitting my mind......

Maybe, I would never be able to forget her or maybe I will forget her with time but one thing I can never forget is "Never leave your loved ones alone".

Characters in the story

F2:- The female mouse

Evil: - The Crow

Neighbourhood Males: - The Male Mouse

Now read it again with above characters in mind... JJJ

10 comments:

Guru said...

After reading the first few lines, I was sure you are talking about mouse.

Guru said...

I think I am more interested in your old and "Special" blogs..

Men Rights said...

Thanks guru....

Julian said...

Are you sure you want me to comment ?

Men Rights said...

julian, I would love to hear from you.. it has been long time we haven't spoken to each other....

Gagan said...

well i was first thot of a chhipkali as there has been a lot of frnzy in your house about lizards...but a chuhi is too cute a thing for such a miserable ending...tch tch...

Cheree said...

Even I thot it wud be a lizard... Anyways, only you possess the skills of writing a blog about a mouse ;)

blog_mallik said...

I loved it :)

Men Rights said...

Thanks friends… will keep writing ..
my upcoming blog will be “When I met Akbar 450 yrs Back!!”, it is draft stage, will post it by 2 days…

Nidhi said...

what was this! ha ha ha haha...